Hi... I'd make some changes on the colour and the title, hope to get more feedback... btw, thanx for you guys that provide very kind and helpful commend!
ok i think can add the silohette for the fat guy projected to the wall, the silohette will projected slimer shape on the wall.. that will make stronger message..
The warmer colours work wonders this time, and the stronger cracks as well! Personally, I prefer the minimalistic way it's finished here now. See what can still be improved and do so at will.
long time no see, hehehe, i think the capital "I" (SLIMMER) kinda disturbing, why not change to small "i" (SLiMMER)..maybe it will help alot...by the way i think that's the ONLY changes that u can do..personally the poster is 99.99999% finish lorrr!
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